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PostSubject: Miyuki Clan (Done!)   Sun Nov 15, 2009 2:10 am

Clan Info

Clan Name Miyuki (Side branch members are not required to take up the clan name.)

Clan History:

Some 300 years ago, there was a clan call the Miyuki. The Miyuki's was a very hidden clan that existed in the Kumo village. The clan was first founded by a unknown person who stay very hidden till death. Not many people knew it back in the first days of it existed, there were really only a limited of number of members in it back then when it first existed. The limited number of the members where the ones that inherited the clan bloodline past down to each other. The bloodline of the clan was the famous Miyuki's eye.

The Miyuki eye bloodline re-semble a bloodline that made their main element in advance techniques and had them grow stronger. The Miyuki Clan as well had seals, ten of them to be known, the others still a mystery. These seals were only given to members of the clan allowing them to use them to protect them. Then a great war came about, which end up killing mostly all of the members except for 2, who became known to past down the new heir of the clan. The new heir of the clan was Ayame Miyuki, who took up the family name at the young age, 11.

In the present time of the clan, Miyuki was known as the clan leader right now at the moment. Others are possibly hiding away that are apart of the clan, but lost and long gone not known. She was searching for members to join the clan and she was trying to make the clan known for its name. She was as well searching for teachers to teach the young, new clan members during this time. The Elements known in the clan was:

Lightning
Water
Earth
Fire
Wind
Light
Darkness


Clan Symbol:

Bloodline Info

Bloodline name: Shimian Specter (Advance Knowledge of Main Element, Advance Jutsu's ability - Different stages to learn.)

Powers:

  • The main element of the user of the bloodline will be advanced in the knowledge of their element.
  • It will enable them to use advance jutsu's and techniques making them stronger.
  • They are enable to see the movement of one of their opponents moves for one turn of the battle, allowing them the advancement of planning their next attack towards the opponents attack.

Limits:

  • If the user overuses her bloodline, it will either kill her/him. Or it will make the user go wild.
  • The bloodline will only allow clan seals to be use in battle when activated.
  • The bloodline will only allow the users main element and jutsu's of that element to be use with the bloodline when battling with it activiated.
  • There are levels to be increased in when using Seal's and the bloodline.

Other Info

--- Bloodline eye image ---



  • The advance knowledge of the element that will be insert in the bloodline will be taught from the teachers, as well it'll come from using the bloodline in practice spars and everything. They will hopefully already have the basic knowledge of the element by the time they are taught this.
  • May have stages, but none of the members know the stages yet until they discover them through roleplay? (Like 4 stages of the Miyuki eye?)
  • Miyuki blood does not have to flow through the user to unlock it at the present time.
  • Another possibly to gain the eye to side branch members is if the teachers determine they are ready for the eye.


--- How to get the bloodline ---

  • The bloodline is limited to the main branch of the clan, and if the clan grows the leader may allow more members to get it or if members of the clan dyes...
  • One of the ways to activated or received your Miyuki bloodline eye is by getting one the teachers of Miyuki to activated your eye by battling you to see if you are ready for the bloodline.
  • Another way you can activiated the eye is to do a 5 post, 3 paragraphs in each post on how you have received your bloodline (Only limited to main branch members again).


---The Clan Branches---

  • Main branch: These are the ones who have the miyuki blood flowing through them or invited in the main branch by the clan leader. There was only one original member of this clan existing in here, Ayame Miyuki. The other members were either invited to join the main branch and given a Miyuki Blood Transplant or was discover as long lost members of the clan that are related to the clan leader. Plus they are the ones with the main knowledge of being able to get the bloodline of the clan. (30 main branch members allow in.)

  • Side branch: These are the members who does not have the blood of the Miyuki flowing through them or were invited to join the side branch. These ones mostly focuses on using their element and weapon of the clan that was given to them from the clan leader or their teacher. These members will be strong like the main branch except they will have a harder time to gaining the bloodline with the Miyuki blood not flowing through them. These members were not required to take up the clan name.

  • A test was given to those who were wanting to join the clan. If they were found to be a strong reflection and good leadership they were given a spot of teaching to the young ninjas of the clan and sorted into the main branch. This was amoutically done for the ones with Miyuki blood flowing through them (Ask the clan leader first) If they were found weaker and did not have the miyuki blood or didn't want a transplant of the blood into them they were sorted in the side branch. With given a weapon and a element to train.


--- Clan Members ---

  • Ayame Miyuki (Main Branch clan leader)
  • Youji Miyuki (Main Branch long lost sibling)
  • Osashi miyuki (Main Branch - Invited to join)


--- Seals ---
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Miyuki Seal's - level 1
(These must be master at level 1 before learning any other seals)

  • Miyuki Seal 1: Miyuki Wrap; This seal will send chakra strings wrapping around the opponent. This will temporary stop all movement of the opponent if done correctly.
  • Miyuki Seal 2: Thunder Impulse; A lightning voltwave is summoned, shooting towards the opponent. If hit, the opponent is shocked badly enough that he/she is unable to hold a weapon.
  • Miyuki Seal 3:
  • Miyuki Seal 4:
  • Miyuki Seal 5: Closing of the wounds; A healing seal that will let small wounds of the user to be heal. Larger wounds would have to have the attention of a medical ninja.
  • Miyuki Seal 6: Elemental Boost; This seal offers the user to boost an attack or jutsu with any basic element of his choose or any element he has already mastered with a Non-elemental attack or to strengthen another elemental attack.


Miyuki Seal's - level 2
(The intermidate seals of the clan, these may be use after level 1 mastery of the seal's. Plus as well the third level of the clan seals may not be use till the end of the mastery of level 2 seals of the clan.)

  • Miyuki Seal 7: Earthen Destruction; This seal makes the user charge there fists with earthen aura and when slammed upon the floor it will either make a fissure or earth spikes rise up from the floor towards there opponent.
  • Miyuki Seal 8: Eerie Sound wave; A sonic boom is sent outward from where the user is standing. The soundwave causes horrible headaches, ringing in the ears, and the equilibrium can be messed up, throwing off the center of balance of anyone caught in the wave.
  • Miyuki Seal 9: Blooming Poison; Small, pink flowers grow all around the opponent. Then, they bloom. When they bloom they shoot hundreds of small needles covered in a paralyzing poison at the enemy. The opponent will have the chance to jump out of the way, if they have the strength to whenever the user uses this move.
  • Miyuki Seal 10: Echo; The user vanishes, and rose petals swarm around the enemy. The enemy then hears echoes of their opponent’s voice.. no. It sounds like a small child laughing. Then without warning, small cuts appear all over the enemy’s body. The cuts become deeper as the echoes of laughing become stronger and louder.


--- Clan Jutsu's ---
The Clan Jutsu's are our advance bloodline jutsu's that are taught by our teachers. More may be created at a later time by our teachers or clan leader.

Non-Elemental Jutsu's
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Katon Element Jutsu's
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Doton Element Jutsu's
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Raiton Element Jutsu's
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Light Element Jutsu's
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Darkness Element Jutsu's
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Suiton Element Jutsu's
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Fuuton Element Jutsu's

[b]No Wind Elements at this time[/'b]


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PostSubject: Re: Miyuki Clan (Done!)   Sun Nov 15, 2009 4:55 am

Seems... incredibly similar to the Xzeno. ._. Good, though. I'll wait for the other admins to say something before approving...
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PostSubject: Re: Miyuki Clan (Done!)   Sun Nov 15, 2009 5:00 am

Hey at least its not godmoddish Wink
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PostSubject: Re: Miyuki Clan (Done!)   Sun Nov 15, 2009 5:01 am

Looks good ~ accepted
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PostSubject: Re: Miyuki Clan (Done!)   Mon Nov 16, 2009 8:47 am

Added clan members list now that its more than me.
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PostSubject: Re: Miyuki Clan (Done!)   Mon Nov 16, 2009 2:39 pm

Uhm... note, that summoning two lions/three dragons would take away a huge chunk of your chakra. Like, 600/600 chakra/stamina.

And, each of the seals, although much less god-moddish than the Xzeno seals, must only be used sparingly. Do this either by making sure each user uses seals matching his/her type (Eg. A ninjutsu user will only use the ninjutsu-based seals, genjutsu will use genjutus, etc.), or, you could make the chakra/stamina costs for each seal really high.

And you didn't make it clear how a user may become "Miyuki". Must Miyuki blood flow through the uesr's veins, or is it possible to give a blood/eye transplant?

Enough of the criticism, the idea for the eye was quite ingenious. Seeing into the future, though, you need a lot of concentration and chakra reserves, and only experienced ninja would be able to do so. So, make sure none of the genin ranked ninja uses the Shimian Specter; saves us a little work.

Just a suggestion; it would be awesome if your bloodline eye had several stages. Only my opinion though.

And when you already have seals, how would you have clan jutsus? Basically, your seals ARE the jutsus...

Answer my questions and your bloodline will officially be put up, right next to the Uchiha clan. Make us proud~♥️
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PostSubject: Re: Miyuki Clan (Done!)   Mon Nov 16, 2009 5:51 pm

o.o I agree with Yaka. Fix all that first~
O.o and, there something I don't really understand/like:

The main element of the user of the bloodline will be advanced in the knowledge of their element.


O.o you mean that, the older members of the clan will teach them or that they get by "miracle" the knowledge? o.O;;
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PostSubject: Re: Miyuki Clan (Done!)   Mon Nov 16, 2009 9:11 pm

x-x Wow.... The most cristim on my clan and character is the ones happening *headdesks*
So here I go.......

added most of you concerns I think, Trying to think of clan jutsus thou I don't really know how they will work in here, might just leave that up to the main teachers in the clan to teach advance jutsus to the ninjas in the clan and let those advance jutsus be known as the clan jutsu. I added two clan braches, got two members under the clan........ I am still trying to think up the two seals that needs to be fill out.
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PostSubject: Re: Miyuki Clan (Done!)   Tue Nov 24, 2009 7:49 am

Bumping the clan up, so you can approved the clan for real.
I added the clan jutsu's and will add on the two clan seals that are missing later. For now all the clan will be focus on is finding a few more members to join, whether side or main branch.
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PostSubject: Re: Miyuki Clan (Done!)   Tue Nov 24, 2009 12:42 pm

Good work on all the changes. ._.;
Still disturbing me how it's so similar to the Xzeno clan.
But since you worked so hard to recreate it into something unique, accepted.
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